Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 8, 2020 19:35:01 GMT -5
I like the song enough. But I'd just reduce the overplay and remove CARDI B from the song.
Post Malone - Wow
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2020 19:42:50 GMT -5
Add a verse or two to make it longer.
Carly Rae Jepsen - Call Me Maybe
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 8, 2020 22:20:53 GMT -5
Change the lyrics to make it less cheesy
R City f/Adam Levine - Locked Away
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 15, 2020 15:00:26 GMT -5
^Fine then. Remove the random goat sounds.
Andy Grammer - Don't Give Up On Me
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Post by Deleted on Apr 15, 2020 16:59:35 GMT -5
Get rid of the slight cringe in Andy’s voice.
French Montana ft. Swae Lee - Unforgettable
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 15, 2020 17:09:20 GMT -5
Make the entire song Swae Lee.
Here's one that's very unknown lol:
Hoang f/Kianna - Gone
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 20, 2020 21:20:40 GMT -5
Well no one bothered to listen to it oof.
I'd make the song a verse longer. It's just too good to be under 3 minutes <3
Twenty One Pilots - Stressed Out
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Post by Deleted on Apr 20, 2020 21:48:14 GMT -5
Remove the ending. Besides that the song’s perfect.
Twenty One Pilots - Level Of Concern
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 20, 2020 22:40:16 GMT -5
Other than the two uses of the word "quarantine" this song is perfect
Conan Gray - Maniac
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Post by Deleted on Apr 20, 2020 22:44:00 GMT -5
That song needs no fixing. It's perfect.
The Weeknd - Can't Feel My Face
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 20, 2020 23:11:16 GMT -5
That song needs no fixing. It's perfect.The Weeknd - Can't Feel My Face If we could respond with that I'm pretty sure more people would have participated in this thread lol For CFMF I think that it's unnecessary for the chorus to be repeated twice in a row.
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Post by BB🌕 on Apr 20, 2020 23:29:10 GMT -5
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Fire
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yes this is my silhouette lol
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Post by Fire on Apr 20, 2020 23:32:03 GMT -5
^Shit sorry lol
Ariana Grande - Thank U, Next
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Post by BB🌕 on Apr 20, 2020 23:34:09 GMT -5
The vocals are poorly mixed in the final chorus so fix that
Harry Styles - Adore You
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Post by Deleted on Apr 20, 2020 23:49:04 GMT -5
Find a chorus more creative than just repeating the same two lines.
SZA & Justin Timberlake - The Other Side
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 21, 2020 0:13:24 GMT -5
Make it less underwhelming. Like a better chorus would help.
Kiiara - Gold
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Post by Deleted on Apr 21, 2020 0:29:02 GMT -5
Make the lyrics in the chorus understandable and put more of a variety of lyrics in the verses instead of basically repeating the same sh*t three times.
Here's one that needs a lot of fixing: Tyga & Curtis Roach - Bored In the House
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Apr 24, 2020 22:55:32 GMT -5
Give it a less repetitive chorus instead of BORED IN THE HOUSE AND I'M IN THE HOUSE BORED over and over again.
WALK THE MOON - One Foot
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Post by Deleted on Apr 24, 2020 23:26:17 GMT -5
Make the bridge more interesting.
Drake - Toosie Slide
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Post by annoymous1 on Apr 25, 2020 8:31:13 GMT -5
Make Drake sound less bored aka monotone and maybe change the beat to make it a little upbeat also get rid of that awful "I could Dance like Michael Jackson" line he says 4 times once is enough.
Beyonce & Jay-Z - Drunk In Love
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Post by Deleted on May 6, 2020 8:56:32 GMT -5
Make the lyrics less bland and a catchier beat.
Chainsmokers ft. ROZES - Roses
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Fire
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Post by Fire on May 6, 2020 11:15:34 GMT -5
I feel that in the verses ROZES does not sound good at all. I'd fix that.
Demi Lovato - I Love Me
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Post by Deleted on May 6, 2020 11:39:14 GMT -5
Replace Demi Lovato with literally anyone else.
Regard - Ride It
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Fire
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Post by Fire on May 6, 2020 12:19:06 GMT -5
Replace Demi Lovato with literally anyone else.Regard - Ride It Yikes. I don't like "I Love Me" either but Demi isn't that bad jeez lol As for "Ride It", there is really very little to fix, but it's kinda uninteresting. So I guess making the song more interesting would help it. Wrabel - 11 Blocks
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Fire
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Post by Fire on May 11, 2020 10:22:29 GMT -5
Okay I'll fix it (though that's hard to do since the song is already perfect). I guess "have the song blow up everywhere" counts lol.
Andy Grammer - I Found You
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2020 10:25:21 GMT -5
Make the song (music and lyrics) a bit more interesting.
Andy Grammer - Keep Your Head Up
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Post by matteeeb on May 11, 2020 17:02:30 GMT -5
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Jay Rock - King's Dead
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Post by sirnice on May 11, 2020 18:55:39 GMT -5
Rewrite Jay Rock's verse from the ground up to be less repetitive, cut the "la di da di da" part from Future's verse, maybe give James Blake more to do.
Future featuring Drake - Life is Good
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2020 18:57:40 GMT -5
There’s not much I’d do to that one. I guess make it a little shorter cuz it feels kinda long.
Drake & Future - Jumpman
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Post by annoymous1 on May 11, 2020 21:00:52 GMT -5
Idk what I would fix maybe the beat but it's one of my favorite drake & future collabs.
Justin Bieber - Intentions
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