Fire
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Post by Fire on May 11, 2020 21:17:25 GMT -5
The verses are kinda bad tbh.
Justin Jesso - If You're Meant To Come Back
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2020 0:36:28 GMT -5
Great discovery. The piano notes at the end kinda bother me, otherwise the song's great.
Decemberists - Sons And Daughters
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Fire
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Post by Fire on May 15, 2020 10:53:13 GMT -5
The vocals at first can be slightly annoying, otherwise I really like the song.
JP Saxe f/Julia Michaels - If The World Was Ending
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Post by Deleted on May 20, 2020 8:52:51 GMT -5
Make the song less dull. I normally like songs like that, but this one is a bit too much.
The Weeknd - Heartless
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Post by BB🌕 on May 20, 2020 9:42:51 GMT -5
Make the chorus less repetitive
Taylor Swift - Style
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Fire
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Post by Fire on May 20, 2020 10:58:01 GMT -5
Nothing. It's absolutely perfect
I guess add a more interesting outro? idk the song is already perfect.
WALK THE MOON - Timebomb
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Fire
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Post by Fire on May 25, 2020 15:06:50 GMT -5
Fine I'll fix it. I've grown to not like the falsettos in the chorus. Otherwise the song is absolutely perfect.
Here's one that needs a lot of fixing.
AJR - BANG!
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2020 15:36:33 GMT -5
Get rid of the lyrics and get rid of AJR.
Lil Mosey - Blueberry Faygo
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Fire
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Post by Fire on May 26, 2020 19:55:31 GMT -5
Have better vocals in the chorus
Owl City - My Everything
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Fire
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Post by Fire on May 31, 2020 12:34:10 GMT -5
Okay fine. I'd give it a better outro I guess.
Post Malone - Circles
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Post by Deleted on May 31, 2020 14:19:44 GMT -5
No fixing necessary.
Chainsmokers ft. Coldplay - Something Just Like This
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Post by annoymous1 on May 31, 2020 18:21:06 GMT -5
Nothing at all
Ariana Grande & Justin Bieber - Stuck With U
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Post by gabe on May 31, 2020 18:23:54 GMT -5
Remove Justin Bieber. More whistles.
Jamala - 1944
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Post by owenlovesmusic on Jun 1, 2020 23:52:36 GMT -5
Frankly, it could use a rapper guest verse. Maybe Future or Gunna.
Truth Hurts by Lizzo
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Post by Deleted on Jun 1, 2020 23:59:18 GMT -5
I'd get rid of the "Yeah I got boy problems that's the human in me, bling bling then I solve em that's the goddess in me" lyric. A bit of a weak and cringy lyric imo. Otherwise I really like the song. About the only Lizzo song that has not burned on me.
Bruno Mars - When I Was Your Man
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Jun 2, 2020 1:04:23 GMT -5
Nothing at all.
Another one that needs a lot of fixing: Robin Thicke f/TI & Pharrell Williams - Blurred Lines
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Post by GP on Jun 3, 2020 7:10:14 GMT -5
the video for starters, the song's innuendo is also problematic.
Justin Bieber - Baby
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Jun 3, 2020 8:50:30 GMT -5
^Ah, the overhated masterpiece lmao. I mean tbh it's not too bad, but I'd fix the repetitive chorus and give it something more creative
Andy Grammer - Wish You Pain
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Jun 9, 2020 14:14:20 GMT -5
fine.
Get rid of the sadistic as hell sounding lyrics in the verses. I get the intention of it but for a song dedicated to your own daughter to be a powerful young woman, saying things like "I hope your doubts come like monsters and terrorize your dreams" and "I hope you put your life out on the line and everybody watches while you fall" just does not fit at all. Still I think it's a great song.
Weezer - The End Of The Game
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2020 14:21:54 GMT -5
Get rid of the “You got me cryin like when Aslan died” line. Otherwise the song is absolutely perfect.
Black Eyed Peas & J Balvin - RITMO
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Post by BB🌕 on Jun 9, 2020 14:26:04 GMT -5
Get a better drop
The Killers - Mr. Brightside
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Jun 10, 2020 18:56:31 GMT -5
Nothing
Bad Wolves - Zombie
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Jun 16, 2020 16:14:46 GMT -5
fine.
i honestly see nothing wrong with it lmao (still not as good as the cranberries version)
Marshmello & Halsey - Be Kind
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2020 13:14:02 GMT -5
The writing in the chorus doesn't hit as hard as it should, I think, so I'd probably fix that. Otherwise, really strong song. (oh, and make it the hit it deserves to be)
Post Malone - Circles
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Jun 17, 2020 13:25:45 GMT -5
nothing.
Roddy Ricch - The Box
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2020 14:13:10 GMT -5
Nothing, except maybe make the masterpiece a little longer.
Trevor Daniel - Falling
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Jun 18, 2020 10:38:07 GMT -5
make the vocals and instrumental more interesting and less like "hot girl bummer"
speaking of:
Blackbear - Hot Girl Bummer
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2020 12:01:46 GMT -5
Make the lyrics in the chorus a bit stronger.
Powfu ft. beabadobee - Death Bed (Coffee For Your Head)
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Fire
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Post by Fire on Jun 18, 2020 12:06:43 GMT -5
several things.
get rid of powfu, who sounds like he is already about to fall asleep. the lyrics sound like they were written by a 6-year old. and what did they do to poor beabadoobee? keep the original version beabadoobee did, aka the far superior version
Sia - Chandelier
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2020 12:26:14 GMT -5
Make the music about a thousand times more chill and make Sia’s voice sound about ten thousand times less cringy, or just start from scratch with a new singer and let Sia stick to her good songs like “Elastic Heart”.
Dan + Shay & Justin Bieber - 10,000 Hours
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